Pretty decent
It was entertaining enough. Not very original in style and story, but you have certainly done a lot of hard work, I can see that. The plot is built very well and it makes the story not boring at all. Although there were a few moments where you were trying to explain what was already understood. And that comic-strip naration was pretty cool. So although there were rough moments in your film, I wish I could make anything like this when I was 14 )))
I wish you to continue and develop!